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dragonsoul

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 13 Oct 2005 16:00   xxx.xxx.xxx.xxx   
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Chi-Chi Phiona Osai - New Day

Hello everybody! Check out this poem I found, it rules! What do you think of it? :D

Chi-Chi Phiona Osai - New Day

I cannot feel the pain you bear,
Nor the emptiness that comes with losing someone dear,
I do not know how many times you have wept,
How many dreamless nights you have slept,
I see, though, that you are in mourning,
Of a cherished soul that left before the day’s dawning,
My dear heart, I weep too,
In my prayers, I place you.
He hasn’t fully passed away,
Believe me, he’s with you everyday,
As long as he’s your treasured stone,
His love will comfort you when in pain you groan,
He takes every step you take,
Though his reflection may not appear on the face of a lake,
Like true soul mates you are,
He’ll be your guiding star.
Don’t you worry, he didn’t sleep alone,
The angels were there to guard their own,
That is why you should smile,
With your fate, you should reconcile,
Maybe his departure is a sign,
Maybe he is your passing angel, your future vine,
Bleed no more, you will be blessed,
You will be seen through this difficult test.

auntc

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 14 Oct 2005 17:56   xxx.xxx.xxx.xxx   
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re: Chi-Chi Phiona Osai - New Day

"Maybe he is your passing angel, your future vine"

What a great thought! Aunt, Carol

dragonsoul

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 16 Oct 2006 11:08   xxx.xxx.xxx.xxx   
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re: Chi-Chi Phiona Osai - New Day

This rules! Also, who are you? You are a new user, where do you come from? :D

phioskey

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 15 Oct 2006 16:08   xxx.xxx.xxx.xxx   
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re: Chi-Chi Phiona Osai - New Day

I think the poem is great and allows for individual interpretation. Grief and loss is something inexplicable but Phiona has managed to communicate these intagible forces with such grace and respect. Great work I say!

 

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